Saturday, February 20, 2016

Prob #3: Twixt D and F

The Po(e)m:

Not_s to S_lf

I thought it would be good for me
but I find:
No fr__dom, no lib_rty, no _quality.

I stand and say: hot dog!
with mustard
but no k_tchup? no r_lish?
I grow melancholy
despondent
somber
sad.
It is tasty but not
d_licious.

Synonyms for r_d?
-       crimson (too bloody)
-       burgundy (too musty)
-       fuchsia (too flashy)
-       maroon (cast-away?)
-       ruby (Wiz. of Oz?)
(not: carmin_; scarl_t; v_rmillion)

I could adopt most _xpl_tiv_s,
if I want to,
but I won’t.
I can say: thank you!
but not please.

I thought it would b_ good for m_
but I find:
I can, I
can swim and drown, but not liv_ and
breathe.

~~~
The Proce(ss):

Initially, I tried writing a poem without worrying about the letter “E” (a great letter, by the way), with the goal of going back to edit after the fact. But after I began to write, I couldn’t ignore the chief objective. I decided to face the vacancy head-on, rather than trying to avoid the letter altogether. I varied between leaving a __ in place of each “E” and writing the full word with a --- through it. The choice to do __ rather than --- ? Fairly arbitrary, but I favor each word with the --- (aka --- = crucial word). I’ve long known the importance of “E.” Endeavoring to omit it only proved that importance.

P.(S). Writing without u(s)ing the l(e)tter(s) (e) & (s) i(s) hard.

- (E)li(ss)a